Junior Book Club Review of "You Must Already Be A Winner" by Chloe
By Chloe (age 11) I really enjoyed this book because I liked the storyline and the themes it was set on. I found the book had a major issue although most of the drama happened in the last part of the book. It was slow to get to the drama because the story just kept going through Olivia's everyday life, one day at a time, where some some stories might skip a week to get to the exciting part. I noticed that most of the sentences were simple sentences rather than compound and complex sentences. The story held a really important theme of care/help, ignorance and truth. Olivia and Berk didn't have much of an idea about what was going on with their parents, so I think their parents should have sat down with Olivia and Berk to tell them what was going on and not to hide the truth from them. I think that Bart is a really important part of the story. As soon as Bart comes into the story he gives Olivia hope. She then starts to face every day with a bit mo...